First Dig Two Graves, the second Zoe thriller.
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In a day of going over old ground and making it new again, I have revisited Zoe's residence in Paris at the time John called, and found it empty, except for some kid who was all 'get lost or suffer the consequences.'
Who is he? We flesh that story out, and how it relates to Zoe and those early days in the story.
Similarly, I'm not happy still with how Worthington discovers Zoe, and this is going to need some more work, and definitely a rewrite.
In fact, I might have to revisit his whole appearance in the story and make it a little less bombastic and a little more subdued seething anger.
The whole Marseilles episode is good, it's just the end and this discovery of who is behind Zoe's abduction that needs a little work. This is where we sow the enigmatic sees of Romanov and his purpose for wanting Zoe if it is not revenge like it is assumed.
Similarly, that whole thing with the Russian Minister and Anton needs a lot more work because there appears to be a connection between him and Romanov, but there's not. This is just Olga leaning on her connections to get a result.
Then Zoe takes off to find Romanov, or is it those seeking revenge, it's not quite clear, and leaves John to contemplate his future. Perhaps a piece here between them that sets the tone for the relationship over the coming months would be good, and the trigger that sets John off on a quest to find her.
His excuses at the moment are wishy-washy at best.
Phew!!! Never knew self-criticism could be so harsh!
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Today's writing, with Zoe languishing in a dungeon waiting for a white knight, 0 words, for a total of 8,871.
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