I have been working on the story, the editor is asking for a third draft after making suggested changes - and I'm now working on it
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Jack's mother is missing, well, not technically missing, but dumping the package and disappearing seemed a very close equivalent.
Maryanne has finally dropped the pretence and told Jack the truth, she is working with the authorities (but will not tell him who exactly they are) and that she is only interested in the diary, which everyone now assumes was in the package.
Who does it belong to? That will be revealed soon.
Failing her mission, Maryanne tells Jack she's been taken off the case, and when Jack tells her is going after Jacob, she decided to tag along, perhaps for his protection.
Looking like Jacob, and going to look for him has some irony attached to it, and it would not be unreasonable to assume Jack is about to find himself in some very hot water, from good people and bad alike.
Then, if that isn't enough on his plate, McCallister, the reputed owner of the diary, and Jacob's father, and probably likely his, calls. He wants the diary back, or Jack's mother will be harmed.
The search is now not for Jacob, but his mother.
Today's effort amounts to 2,186 words, for a total, so far, of 51,629.
More tomorrow.
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