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I am my own worst enemy, again!

Site logo image aloysius5 posted: "I think most authors are. Just when you think that the story is done, and you're on the third re-read, just to make sure… Damn! I don't like the way that chapter reads, and what's worse, it's about the tenth time I've looked at it. It doesn't matter t" Thrills, Spills, and just a dash of Romance Read on blog or Reader

I am my own worst enemy, again!

aloysius5

February 2

I think most authors are.

Just when you think that the story is done, and you're on the third re-read, just to make sure…

Damn!

I don't like the way that chapter reads, and what's worse, it's about the tenth time I've looked at it.

It doesn't matter the last three times you read it, it was just fine, or, the editor has read it and the chapter passed without any major comment.

I think the main problem I have is letting go.  For some odd reason, certain parts of a story sometimes seem to me as though they are not complete, or can be missing a vital clue or connection for the continuity of the story.

That, of course, happens when you rewrite a section that is earlier on in the story, and then have to make ongoing changes.

Yes, I hear the stern warnings, that I should have made a comprehensive outline at the beginning, but the trouble is, I can change the ending, as I'm writing it and then have to go back and add the hooks earlier on.  Not the best method, but isn't that what an editor is for, to pick up the missed connections, and out of the blue events that happen for no reason?

I find that often after leaving a finished story for a month before the next reading, the whole picture must formulate itself in my head, so when I re-read, there was always a problem, one I didn't want to think about until the re-read.

Even then it might survive a second pass.

I know the scene is in trouble when I get to it and alarm bells are going off.  I find anything else to do but look at it.

So, here I am, making major changes.

But, at least now I am satisfied with where it's going.

Only 325 pages to go!

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